Why my dreamgirl doesn’t turn into real world ?

~*******~

U get me …. Up

U get me …. Down

U get me …. In

U get me ….out

I always wander here and around

But u send no soothing sound

~~~~~~~~~~~~

In d warm closet of my room

she embroiders on a piece of paper

the world’s piercing words loom

sitting on chair

and her pen dancing at d entry of her luscious lips

moving back n forth….

while her mind engaged in circulation of d crazy stuff taught in our class room….

Her right leg posted above her left one

goes right a little and left a more….

The scene I see, flames my heart with extra sensuality

I lose my punctuality…

dreaming abt her…My heart beats faster…….

or…. may be slower

as it is difficult to say……….

But den dis this repeats all day….

in my mind, in my room, in my body n soul…

~~~~~~~~~~~

As I slide down

more down

my fingers down her head to her lips

with a flick about her lips

she shivers, or she shies ..

unable to guess

but my heart is on high…

~~~~~~~~~~

In d rain I find rhythm of joy

when her legs sprang low up n high down

the smile, d innocence

the peer sense of her natural delight

pounds my feelings about her

I get another chance to indulge in

fantasy or say d most fantastic world to me……

But my feelings festered

my dreams deformed

as soon as I realized

that another guy has captured

the girl of my dreams

I am left with nothing else screams

~~~~~~~~

U get me …. Up

U get me …. Down

U get me …. In

U get me ….out

I always wander here and around

But u send no soothing sound

~*******~
Written By SaurabhStar
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4 Comments

  1. hi SaurabhStar :mrgreen:

    how do write all these i am really amazed :o
    really nice articles :P

    i suggest u to copywrite ur stuff here 8O

    http://creativecommons.org/license/

    bye and goodluck :)

    ;)

  2. @ pirate bro, thanx for ur kind words n kind advice… now contents officially copyrighted… :idea:
    Wish u all d best in ur love life :!:

  3. julius says:

    very eloquently put. you do have a gift with words. but I also have a question in mind.. does a “dreamgirl” really exist in reality? or they’re just figments of our expectations and standards? As for me, I never had my dreamgirl, but I married the perfect girl for me.

    cheers buddy!

  4. @ julius, In this poem, the girl catches the dreams of d lover in reality so here the dreamgirl exists coz d idea of dreamgirl forms after he sees such a girl… Had he never met such a girl, he would have never thought of dreamgirl ..
    The question which caused ur attent (“does a dreamgirl exist in reality ? “) is not about dreamgirl but about girl of fictitious contrived imagination.. :roll:

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