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U get me …. Up
U get me …. Down
U get me …. In
U get me ….out
I always wander here and around
But u send no soothing sound
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In d warm closet of my room
she embroiders on a piece of paper
the world’s piercing words loom
sitting on chair
and her pen dancing at d entry of her luscious lips
moving back n forth….
while her mind engaged in circulation of d crazy stuff taught in our class room….
Her right leg posted above her left one
goes right a little and left a more….
The scene I see, flames my heart with extra sensuality
I lose my punctuality…
dreaming abt her…My heart beats faster…….
or…. may be slower
as it is difficult to say……….
But den dis this repeats all day….
in my mind, in my room, in my body n soul…
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As I slide down
more down
my fingers down her head to her lips
with a flick about her lips
she shivers, or she shies ..
unable to guess
but my heart is on high…
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In d rain I find rhythm of joy
when her legs sprang low up n high down
the smile, d innocence
the peer sense of her natural delight
pounds my feelings about her
I get another chance to indulge in
fantasy or say d most fantastic world to me……
But my feelings festered
my dreams deformed
as soon as I realized
that another guy has captured
the girl of my dreams
I am left with nothing else screams
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U get me …. Up
U get me …. Down
U get me …. In
U get me ….out
I always wander here and around
But u send no soothing sound

hi SaurabhStar
how do write all these i am really amazed
really nice articles
i suggest u to copywrite ur stuff here
http://creativecommons.org/license/
bye and goodluck
@ pirate bro, thanx for ur kind words n kind advice… now contents officially copyrighted…
Wish u all d best in ur love life
very eloquently put. you do have a gift with words. but I also have a question in mind.. does a “dreamgirl” really exist in reality? or they’re just figments of our expectations and standards? As for me, I never had my dreamgirl, but I married the perfect girl for me.
cheers buddy!
@ julius, In this poem, the girl catches the dreams of d lover in reality so here the dreamgirl exists coz d idea of dreamgirl forms after he sees such a girl… Had he never met such a girl, he would have never thought of dreamgirl ..
The question which caused ur attent (“does a dreamgirl exist in reality ? “) is not about dreamgirl but about girl of fictitious contrived imagination..